Tuesday, November 6, 2012

WP4 zero draft



I.                   Introduction: 
Hook: Stem cells can turn into all of the human tissues by reproducing and regenerating themselves. The stem cells become controversy regarding morality aspects. 
Thesis:
Although there are governments and theologians that disagree with stem cells, they are useful for curing diseases such as cancer, Parkinson's and Alzheimer's and morally accepted.
II.                History of stem cell
Adult stem cell.
Embryonic stem cell.
III.             Benefits 
Curing cancer, Parkinson's, Alzheimer's
Repair nervous system.
IV.             Adult vs. embryonic stem cells
Difference between them.
V.                Immorality aspect
Theologian theory regarding embryos.
VI.             Moralization
Scientists theory about saving human's life.
VII.          Conclusion
Stem cells are useful and morally accepted. The research on stem cells should be expanded.

Monday, November 5, 2012

MP4 Zero Draft

Teenage Parents Slowly Declining

1. Introduction:

  • HOOK: Briefly describe the current day birthrate and how it is declining and currently at it's all time low.
  • THESIS: Slowly but surly the birthrate is slowing down due to the fact that teen pregnancy is declining as the rates are currently at it's all time low since the 1940's, I want to inform myself as well as the readers as to why our current day birthrate statistic is lower than it has ever been.
  • IMPLICATIONS: The cause of the decline come from the uprising use of dual contraceptives as well as teenagers waiting to have sex.
2. Modern Day Statistics:
  • Currently the statistics are continuing to lower, we are at the lowest rate since 1946. 
3. Some Opinions Vs. Others:
  • Many people have different opinions as to why the rate is declining, some believe the recession is the main cause for this, however the recession has nothing to do with the often not-planned teen pregnancy's, however many others believe in more modern statistics like teen waiting to have sex. 
4. Teenagers Who Wait:
  • Many teens are beginning to wait more to have sex until marriage or at least later in life.
5. The Use of Two:
  • For the teens who are having sex the use of dual contraceptives is also used which allows the chances of unplanned pregnancy to be significantly low. 

6. Conclusion:
  • Keeping the rate low (how to continue solving the issue of teen pregnancy) 


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Is the Drinking Age the Real Problem?
      I. Hook: the comsumption of alcohol has been through many debates. its been abolished and now faces its most controversial topic. The Drinking age.
          Thesis: While some believe the drinking age should be lowered. I believe the legal drinking age was implemented to save lives.
     II. The drinking age saves lives.
       A. raising the drinking age to 21 has saved thousands of lives.
       B.number of crashes due to drunk driving has decreased.
     III.  Teens aren't responsible
        A. if the drinking age were to be lowered, teens would drink more often and increase fatalities.
        B. Teens often binge drink, consume as much alcohol as quickly as possible.
        C. geared more towards college age and even high school students.
     IV. How are teens affected by the lowered drinking age in other countries?
        A. European teens are exposed to alcohol at younger age,but still are irresponsible drinkers
        B. binge drinking occurs more often among teens 15 and 16 years of age.
      V. How can teens be taught to drink more responsibly?
         A. Implement a drinking permit to teach teens to drink more responsibly.
          B. teach a course in alcohol
      VI. Being treated like adults
         A. 18 year olds are able to vote, buy apartments and buy cigarrettes but are not able to buy alcohol.
         B. if they are able to do these why not buy alcohol? Should the above things be raised to 21? or should lowering the drinking age be considered.
       VII. conclusion
           A. Is underage drinking or Binge drinking the real problem?
           B. if teens were taught to drink responsibly and change mindset of alcohol consumption then maybe lowering of the drinking age could be considered.
            C. until then, age should remain to save lives of high school but mostly college age students.

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Suicide and Depression, The Silent Killers
1.     Introduction
a.    Hook- Use statistic about who is affected most by suicide and why. Then discuss why more people need to be aware of what depression is and why it is so dangerous if not recognized soon enough.
b.    Thesis- Based on information from the National Suicide Prevention Organization,  depression is a disease that mostly affects children and young adults by bullying, self-image, and genetics.
c.     Implications- Why is suicide so  common among young people? If there is a way to stop it globally, how should we go about doing this?
2.     The history of suicide
a.    Why is it on the rise now 
3.     The causes of depression and eventually suicide
a.    Bullying (verbal, physical, cyber), self-image that is brought on by the media, and genetically some children are more prone to being depressed and lack self-esteem and worth.
4.     The group or age group most affected by suicide
a.    The most affected age group are males 17- 25. Why is this?
5.     Addressing this problem to the audience
a.    How can the government, the people, and the media work together to end the rising of this sick disease that is so common in the world today.
6.     How can it be stopped
a.    By joining together and making changes as a group of people, we can greatly reduce the risk of this happening.
7.     Conclusion

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The Inconvenient Realities of Climate Change
1.      Introduction
a.      Hook- Briefly describe the movie “An Inconvenient Truth” made by Al Gore. In this 2006 documentary  Gore flatly lays out the negative direction the world’s climate is heading in and predictions for the future.
b.      Thesis- Based on scientific evidence and data, what Gore was warning 6 years ago is coming true. With that said, I want to explore what impacts climate change will have on the average US citizen. This paper will also discover the causes of climate change and how its progress can be slowed.
c.      Implications- What direct impacts of climate change will affect US citizens? Will it really interfere with everyday life in America? If so, how can it be stopped?
2.      Climate Change from a historical context
a.      The idea that human being activity can affect the climate change is not new.
3.      The causes of Climate Change
a.      The activities that people do everyday that contribute to rising temperature is called your carbon footprint
4.      Climate Change today
a.      Climate change is reaching a tipping point where it can no longer be ignored
5.      Addressing the Skeptics
a.      There are a still a lot of people who still believe that climate change is a myth, and I will provide factual evidence that it is not.
6.      How can it be stopped
a.      There are many things an average US citizen can do to help reduce their carbon footprint
7.      Conclusion

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Due: Wednesday 8:00AM 
Write out four or five argumentative subheads for your own potential outlines. Do not use ‘body’ but should play with language and make a small argument or thesis of each subheads.

Title
 I. Introduction
          Hook: Narrative, background
          Background of topics
          Thesis
II.  Subheads for Body paragraph 1
          Topic sentence
III. Subheads for Body paragraph 2
          Topic sentence
IV.  Subheads for Body paragraph 3
          Topic sentence
V.  Subheads for Body paragraph 4
          Topic sentence
VI. Subheads for Body paragraph 5
          Topic sentence
VII. Conclusion