ZERO DRAFT

Social Destruction

 I. Introduction

          Hook: Describe the role of social networking and how it is used today to the extreme 

          Thesis: Social networking is ruining society and future generations

II.  Examples of why is is a bad thing

           There are many reasons to why this social outbreak sets a horrible future for our society

III. Statistics

          Some of the statistics from the past decade are.... They have risin exponentially 

IV.  Addressing the opposition 

          While this is not a good thing, some people believe social networking is a great thing, and they can be right, but only to some extent. 

V.  Back in time

          Today's youth does not go outside and play anymore, speaking with a few "old people" they explain nostalgic memories of playing outside from sun up to sun down; today, nobody goes outside because they are inside playing on the computer. 

VI. Solution

          While it is impossible for us to turn back time and erase the outbreak, there is a way to limit the amount of time kids and other people spend on the computer.

VII. Conclusion

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Free Write Project 2

When I was a sophomore in High School, the Tiger Woods scandal started to unwind. I am an avid golfer and I grew up watching all of Tiger's famous shots and win after win after win. I loved it and always supported Tiger and his outrageous celebrations and what not. 

When it came out that Tiger Woods was sleeping around with numerous women, I was at my friends house after Thanksgiving waiting to get up early for black friday. It came on the news and we were all shocked. Although, we did feel bad for his wife, because who would do that to someone they cared about so much.  

Anyway, a lot of stuff fell down on him all at once and a lot of the sponsors dropped him, but Nike was loyal to him and stuck with him. It was a genius strategy with their simple ad pictured below and helped gained the support of him and Nike's partnership in the future of his career and to the day, he is almost back to the same social standing as before. 

Well, it has been ten minutes. I am excited to write this paper because of my love for golf, Tiger, and Nike. 

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